PEER EVALUATION-1

    It was a well-organized paragraph and I like its content,too.I couldn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes.She used the right words.Also, the transitions among the sentences were well-organized.The way that she tells the film makes me want to watch it, but isn't it a bit long?I think it should be shorter.That she writes her own opinions in the paragraph makes it more interesting.It is not a difficult writing, so it can be understood easily.Her usage-of-words is good.She used the connectors appropriately and sufficiently.

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