PEER EVALUATION-2

    First of all,the design of the blog is amazing.I liked the background picture.Her writing was good,too.She wrote her opinions and feeling very well.That dream is so pretty.I suggest her to make it real if she believes that she can do it.The structure of the paragraph would be in order, but she used the words properly.There are not any grammar or spelling mistakes.She used enough and appropriate connectors.She started the paragraph with a proper sentence and finished it accordingly.That she mentions about her old experiences strengthens the paragraph.

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